JiminQueens2's blog

Normally not my thing but I'm loving the story. No issues from me so far, nothing to criticize.

It's impossible to please everyone. Some want more action. Some want more eroticism. Some like to read about big, older guys. Some want younger and thinner. Your story is covering as many bases as possible and doing it very well with believable and appealing characters. A longer, multi-part story does run the risk of losing some readers. But that's the chance you take when that's the story you want to write.
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I’ll be honest, I don’t read any of these kinda stories - I’m not one for the erotic fiction - I know I’m very much in minority it seems on this site, but I don’t think it really has a place here.

I don't think you're in the minority at all, except for the minority of those willing to voice an opinion. And while the ideal is that everyone should keep it real here and actually meet for matches, the fact is that fantasy plays a large part in the attraction of this site by meeting the needs of those who can't meet for matches as often as they'd like, if ever.
Chatfighters is almost exclusively a cyber match site.

Good job Jim! You’re a great writer and it shows that you put a lot of thought into your stories

Love them. Maybe neighbour or mud wrestljng. Or buds hanging out and dad’s former opponents. All in cum stained singlets